If you could change your
identity for a day, who would you like to become? Actually ,I am I , the one
and the only,but if I have a chance, maybe I want to be a person who I like it.
For example ,Taylor Swift.she is a famous
singer and songwriter from American that was known for many country music .
I would like to be her ,first ,I’ll take off my high-heel
shoe, because she is 1.8 meter, I just 1.6 meter, I can dress causal but looks like model ,wonderful! Second , I will
hold a concert, I like singing ,enjoy the music, and I can do everything that I
want to do ,because this is my concert. Third ,I want to write a song for some
poor children, music give us full of energy ,once I used to support some
children to school, I know they are eager for knowledge , for happiness ,or
just for food, Even if they are poor but
all of them like music, it makes them happy.
Owesome! I also think that music makes people happy, so it is good idea to write a song for childeren!
ReplyDeleteGood choice...Taylor Swift is very popular and successful now. She's also well-known for breaking up with famous guys and then writing songs about them!
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She is a famous singer and songwriter from America that is known for many country songs.
*Again, be careful with commas...you should only use one or two commas per sentence. If a sentence has three or more commas, it probably needs a period.* :)